Ok so here i've changed the colour from black scribbles to a navy-blue, as i thought as an end result the photograph would look more disturbing and defaced if it were covered in black.. rather than blue. Makes sense. And i've also changed the order to a random mix, rather than the samey left or right, left to right, left to right stuff (Just for this part and after though that is).




The scribbles are starting to become more fierce as well and not just swirly scribbles, but start to take on a zig zag type form.


Steo by step it becomes more defaced. The voice over 1-10 still going on.


This being the end result now, instead of the previous post. It looks far more menacing and maybe even serious? being black, sinister perhaps too.


I'm really happy with the changes i made, and im not going to put them in FinalCut Pro and think about sound now too.