Top of car park stuff

So i went back to the car park roof and filmed that building i shot in the Gursky shoot. I panned from left- right and i put a voice over of me counting steady
1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10
11.12.13.14.15.16.17.18.19.20
It then cuts to the sky, showing a break.. my mind wandered. And then cuts back to the shot like below starting the counting again
1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10
11.12.13.14.15.16.17.18.19.20

Not really feeling that enthusiastic about this idea to be honest, well not the idea but just the way ive gone about filming. I hadn't really planned, just had a rough idea in my head so when it came to edit i kind of hand no plan and did anything with it really..which was rubbish. Urg so annoying. I guess this is part of the experimentation then, trial and error.
This being the error.